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    Sunday
    27Jul2008

    Summer Crossing

    and somehow it is better that we are apart- by sea, by timezone, by distance
    fire will come from  our fingers at the slightest touch you see
    and i will love you too much
    more than even now, which already is animal like
    the screaming fox, second only to the mountain lions holler
    makes the noise of this love

    barn owl
    north wind
    midnight  i am falling


    see it in the mountains, in the cut of the path, where the river becomes too hard to cross
    the place where we leave the offerings
    i have touched you lightly here and knew you did not want me to go

    and as i walk  along the river bank i know how badly you want me to follow you- all the way home
    wherever that is now

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    Reader Comments (7)

    :)

    Beautiful, touching.. passionate
    I love it

    July 27, 2008 at 11:22PM | Unregistered CommenterNahuatl

    it felt as if I was the one
    you touched

    July 28, 2008 at 06:28AM | Unregistered Commenterreading_is_dangerous

    You always there, writing and showing your tiny electronic miracles.

    Great writings.

    You touch everybody with your unique amazing art.

    The One who gave you the word recognizes masterspoets.

    Thanks.

    August 7, 2008 at 03:43PM | Unregistered CommenterIn the clouds

    Did you remove the latest song post?! :(

    August 15, 2008 at 10:32AM | Unregistered CommenterNahuatl

    you write very beautifully

    August 20, 2008 at 08:18AM | Unregistered Commentermacky

    Thank you for this poem, very evocative.

    August 20, 2008 at 09:41AM | Unregistered CommenterEdita

    thank you all for reading and for your kind words...

    August 23, 2008 at 11:22PM | Registered Commenter[Takes Back aka Jacksta]

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